Curiosity and Critical Thinking:
- Critical thinking
- Curiosity
I especially like that they’ve reversed the order to try to avoid the impression that they’ve just typed the same thing twice.
It’s going to be a long day.
Thursday, October 28, 2010
Words fail me
I am ‘editing’ (turning gibberish into language) a graduate recruitment pack. The section that lists the qualities applicants should have is currently divided into subheads with sets of bullet-points underneath, and I’m supposed to turn each of these into a paragraph of flowing, meaningful, engaging prose. One of the sets looks like this:
I especially like that they’ve reversed the order to try to avoid the impression that they’ve just typed the same thing twice.
It’s going to be a long day.
I especially like that they’ve reversed the order to try to avoid the impression that they’ve just typed the same thing twice.
It’s going to be a long day.
1 comment:
At present I reckon a graduate recruitment pack just needs to say 'job offered - money paid'
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